My first chapter! -New Story-

It was late December, after Christmas. My Aunt and her family were coming down. Of course as any mom would do she had as cleaning for her sister's arrival. It was about 3 hours before my family would be here. I was vacuuming. I had just got an MP3 and I already had almost ALL my library on there. Of course I had the Jonas Brothers and Boys like Girls on there. They were the first. I was in more of JB's song mood. I put them on and cranked it up. After that I was unaware of anyone's presence. I was dancing, singing, and vacuuming, I did this through S.O.S, Hold On, Goodnight & Goodbye [<- My personal favorite] and That's Just The Way We Roll. Hello Beautiful had came on so I decided to take a break, I fell to the floor. I had been resting for like 10 seconds and I hear applause and whistling. I look up through the screen door. My Aunt, Uncle and Cousin were standing there with 7 strangers with hoodies and sunglasses. 'How Odd' I thought to myself. After getting up I straightened out my shirt and denim skirt, fixed my hair and went to the door. 'Sammy! You have grown into a young lady! Your gorgeous' My Aunt exclaimed. 'Thanks Aunt Barbie, Koda MAN!' I exclaimed. 'SAMMY JO!' he said. 'The one and only' I responded. 'Nice moves' anonymous says, while two other snicker. 'Well I was told my RELATIVES would be here in 3 hours' I got in anonymous face, 'and besides I could care less on what you think of me and besides I have moves anyways.' I got it all out. 'FIESTY!!' one says and him and another do a little handshake. 'Yea, you got a problem?' I said getting angry. 'SAMANTHA JO! show them their rooms and one will have to stay with you.' My uncle told me. About that time my family comes out with luggage.' Bye honey we will be back soon' Mom said. 'Great now im stuck with losers.' I said under my breath. 'What was that?' Someone else asks. 'You losers!' I said and walked in, they followed since my aunt and uncle were at the car seeing my parents off. 'Wow, from what we heard you are supposed to be an obsessive fan.' one explained. 'Wait hold on I thought I recognized your voices. You’re Boys like Girls and The Jonas Brothers.!' With that being said they removed their hoodies and sunglasses. 'Yea I speak my mind a lot so watch out. There now you have had a warning.’

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